Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Controversies surrounding the attitude of people towards their significant beneficial in working condition have been never ceased. Many people claimed that an unideal job or a little payment are acceptable while others believed improving these drawbacks has enormous value to people. In my opinion, individuals who try fulfill themselves in any situation tend to be more successful than those do not.
There are various reasons why a person has to accept the worse chances in many situations. Firstly, people may be forced to decide because of their poor conditions. There are many people who do not have ability to pay for essential demands. For example, a homeless would probably spend all of his time on making money to survive every day. His priority on food, shelter and so on makes him to live in a bad situation. Moreover, the lack of experiences of people could prevent them on better chances also. To illustrate, unskilled workers are paid less than those who are skillful. To sum up, there are two main reasons why people have to accept their unsatisfactory living.
It is understandable why people put efforts on developing. Advanced the situation means they are on the way to become an expert in their major. The payment and the compensation would increase due to the accomplished skills. For example, after two years working so hard in the bank as an accounting, my mother has been nominated for the chief accountant. My mom’s salary is higher and now she is able to provide the best caring to our family.
In summary, trying to enhance the life quality can be stressful at first but it’s worth it. Even though there are many difficulties, people still need to overcome it and improve themselves in order to get a better life and enjoy it constantly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have never been
...ificant beneficial in working condition have been never ceased. Many people claimed that an uni...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...le could prevent them on better chances also. To illustrate, unskilled workers are p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, as to, for example, in summary, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75978058709 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5088501411 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191870965541 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494313993595 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046843259023 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108791189594 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520203204008 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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