In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is estimated that printed newspapers and book will have become obsolete thanks for computers and mobile devices which will allow people to have access to these of electronic versions free of charge. I believe that people will leave behind traditional newspapers and books, and will adapt to new technology.

To access up-to-date information, people have to be online on a regular basis, even if paper-based newspapers have more advantages. Firstly, traditional newspapers and books are as more reliable as the Internet, not mentioned to being informative and verified. For example, local news which are published in the newspapers may be biased on the Internet. Therefore, unbiased sources of information are still printed newspapers and books. However, people are more likely be along with the trend and use devices to access online sources as it provides massive amount of information for free.
In addition to not requiring payment, people are accustomed to reading online news which offers several user-friendly features. Take, for instance, subscription to online newspapers in which enabled pop-up notifications. Online users by using such functions, without doubt, would not miss any news and therefore, the demand for traditional newspapers is decreasing significantly. Furthermore, all that data which are obtained free of charge make people be even more addicted to them.
Conversely, it is not uncommon to see that people are chasing to find free books. The Internet allows books to be stored on the cloud where users can access to that information from various devices. For instance, the storage of hundreds of books requires several megabytes which makes way for people to spread worldwide and therefore, other readers would be reluctant to purchase these books for money. Although most books are published for free use, there are still writers who loss the majority part of their revenue due to the spreading information freely.
In conclusion, despite becoming less popular, printed newspapers are of reliance and provide proved sources. Nevertheless, people's attitude towards online newspapers are increasing for several reasons. I believe that online newspapers and books will be inseparable part of our life and publisher would not have adverse impact on their revenue.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45224719101 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83980150793 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519662921348 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9442297778 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177383947057 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670046565227 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383498525626 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120015337266 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428466865661 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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