In future we may have to live in other planets for this reason some people think it is best to spend on research about other planets such as mars To what extend do you agree or disagree

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In future we may have to live in other planets for this reason ,some people think it is best to spend on research about other planets such as mars.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that researching other planets will be beneficial for human beings if we need to settle, in particular situations. For instance, mar's case study will be great .i am completely agreed with the statement that the analysis of different planets is quite essential for existence. this essay will explain the reasons following my opinion about the same.
To begin with, giving time to study a specific solar system’s body is the best idea which will help us by providing options for our living. Now, the earth is rapidly overpopulated which will bring in many consequences such as global warming down the road by the excessive uses of fuels. Therefore, it is good to predict any possibilities to live in other planets like Mars. There is a shred of evidence provided that few people reached mars for an experiment about life existence possibility. Furthermore, the study on such subject matters will broaden the horizon about the globe.
Nowadays, lives in the earth is getting less favorable because of various pollution and pollution and diseases. Take an example, most of the countries have faced an outbreak of coronavirus which killed many people and infected numerous lives. This pandemic disease might be arisen by human carelessness that’s why research should be done on other heavenly bodies also. However, few predictions have been made by scientist but no best results occurred till now.
In my opinion, in order to avoid chaos or issues in the future, the country must invest a huge amount for research centers, laboratories, science and technology departments, etc. Additionally, more and more youths should be encouraged regarding innovations to save the earth.
I will pen down by saying that we must keep searching the hidden facts about the world and prepare for future indulging experts and youths by providing all necessary supports.

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Average: 5 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in particular, such as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17434210526 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74516187038 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651315789474 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.809572284 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.866666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272074519225 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804660459231 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595663646509 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130734024798 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771630043292 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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