Work is the major problem in this world nowadays.Many people are jobless because of different reasons;personal quality is one of those reasons which is lacking in an employee over experience and academic certificates to get the job of their choice.I consider that qualities are needed rather than others.
To begin with , good qualities are the basic need to be an employee in any type of job.Person who have been working with qualities like self-confident ,hardworking ,wise etc until now are the successful one. job seeker's should possess such beautiful things to achieve what they want in life.For instance , a salesman have to be smart and polite dealing with customers, to sell products.Additionally, It rely on your self -possessed behaviour to stay in your work.Any company will of course look your qualifications but also your positive attitudes.
A further aspect of having moral qualities instead of work experiences is that you will be demanded everywhere because of your good behaviour and politeness; progress and achievements. Today's businessman ,Job provider all have had the skills to choose the correct person as an employee.Beside from that they also see all your personality than what you did and what education you have achieved.Absolutely , a company will hire those who can give their best performance in his job by keeping their qualities with them like respect ,honest ,social and punctual etc.If a restaurant is providing good services but their staff's are not polite to their costumers then it will surely degrade the status of the restaurant.
In conclusion, I think both aspects are necessary to get the employment however personal quality is the one that will move you ahead in your destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24909747292 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19916283692 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.726301751 49.4020404114 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.333333333 106.682146367 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1666666667 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248983338312 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122534879046 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024660150854 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147054738186 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014270585969 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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