Some people think that paying tax is their only duty while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Essay topics:

Some people think that paying tax is their only duty, while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is irrefutable that tax should be paid to the state as our duty whereas there are few more responsibilities that community need to do as countrymen which will be helpful for the development of both people and nation.

To begin with, tax revenues are the right of government so it must be given as a citizen because these funds are used for public purposes. The state authorities will divide the collected amount for specific purposes such as infrastructure development, health safety, life security, education, transportation, and many more. Take an example of my country Nepal, Over-bridge was constructed by bureaucrats in most of the populated places for the pedestrian's safety in the past two years. This was a great way to reduce accidents and traffic congestion. Additionally, taxes must be paid in time so that the state will make effective plans for the future.

Similarly, we have also some responsibilities towards the community which will definitely enhance the places where we are living.We have to take care of the environment to avoid different types of pollutions and diseases It is our pivotal part to serve for colonies to stay in clean and green surroundings which will obviously boost human development. For instance, in my society, we do clean free areas and manage waste products regularly in every week. This society rules made us responsible and proud; good response from nearby societies.

In my opinion, duties play a vital role to uplift the quality of the environment and nation although tax is essential to secure life. Therefore, it is our loyal duty to help the government accumulating huge money so can be used in need.

In conclusion, it is mandatory to pay taxes to the nation and also fulfill few works regarding the society for the betterment of human beings and country.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03973509934 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98444132941 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8189884485 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182443205843 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602393351151 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500048945316 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106317764548 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047563237161 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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