in future, will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
According to the statement, in the upcoming time, people will be able to read and find everything related to news and study online what they want they want and they will not need to pay any charges for them. Therefore, this will completely demolish the sales of printed newspaper and books. I completely agree with this statement and reasons behind this are explained in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, in today's modern era, technology become too vast and in future, this will become at high peak which leads to removal of printed newspapers and books and replace them to e-books especially. The major reason behind this is the invention of android mobile phones, laptops and computers. Because in these electronic gadgets, there are lot of applications which are available related to studies and news. For instance, e-books are most popular application which easily download through play store or app store. In these applications, people can find everything related to studies and other knowledge without any charges and physical efforts. From these applications, they can search every book and also get extra information related to scientific as well as societal terms which boosts their knowledge in a great way. As a result, they will not need to buy any printed books which they want.
In addition, there are also numerous applications related to news channels through which people can listen to news related to every field such as bollywood, politics, international affairs and so on. The advantage about these applications is that people can listen to news in every language as they can convert it into their own mother tongue also just by one touch. For instance, "Times Of India" is the most popular newspaper which is easily available on every website. As a result, people can listen to news at any place any time without much efforts. Due to this, printed newspaper will be replaced by these applications and websites.
To conclude, according to my view point, the number applications and websites which are available in every android gadgets, will definitely replace the printed newspapers and books by them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'they want'.
Suggestion: they want
...g related to news and study online what they want they want and they will not need to pay any charg...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ern era, technology become too vast and in future, this will become at high peak which le...
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Line 2, column 812, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a great way" with adverb for "great"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...etal terms which boosts their knowledge in a great way. As a result, they will not need to buy...
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Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n to news at any place any time without much efforts. Due to this, printed newspaper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11428571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66227461439 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494285714286 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4603452895 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323641275887 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116207714616 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119817554462 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225236235058 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156280169426 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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