Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?
According to the statement, business sectors should supply sports and other social services to local society for their improvement and development.However, it seems to me as strong disagreement towards this notion and reasons are explained in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there is responsibility of legal authorities to provide such services as sports, transportation and so on instead of business companies.Because, there are plenty of reasons due to which business sectors should not done such practices.The first and foremost factor is, they should provide maximum concentration on their productivity and employees rather than to provide aid. Because, there are number of employees who are worked in such buisness companies and they represent their hard work to incline the productivity of their company.Therefore, companies should give attention to increase the wages of their labours and provide bonuses to for their extra paid time.Because, it is essential for them due to which workers become loyal to their company and be more dedicated.As a result, this shows positive aspect towards their business, because if employees show more dedication towards their work, hence the company will go forward to their progression due to their superior tasks.
Furthermore, the another factor is their low funds.In this criteria, there are number of companies which are suffered from declination of their funds.Therefore, they should concern towards their financial conditions and their progression rather to give aid for local groups.Because, if they provide such aids therefore they may leads to stuck in bankrupt due to their worse financial situations which they may spend on unless works of local community.Apart from that, the another major factor behind thus criteria is, high risk of decline in progression and their popularity.Because, there are numerous companies which provides social aid and due to this they face such problems.For instance, in Europe, a small business company supplied funds to local group instead of seek their financial situations. Hence, their doors became closed because they were gone under dept due to low budget.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, business sections are not responsible to provide social aid for local communities.Because, this shows negative impression on them such as go under bankrupt, dept and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57300275482 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29537617462 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501377410468 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 243.062406253 49.4020404114 492% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 337.166666667 106.682146367 316% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 20.7667163134 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.1666666667 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16539112419 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976270305823 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472902698001 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124946153128 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131032670711 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.0946893788 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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