More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather being face to face.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
In today's modern era, technology become too vast and due to this, internet become major source and also in hot list, and people become netizens. Therefore, more to more businesses as well as masses are used to conversate with others by using internet websites as compared to, in person. In the upcoming paragraphs, advantages and disadvantages of this are justified and I also give my own opinion.
To begin with, there are plenty of advantages of using technology in all sectors such as business. The first and foremost merit is preservation of time. In this criteria, individuals do not have need to waste their time on transportation to reach their destination. They do their all essential works and meeting at home wheather it is with citizens or global citizens by proper management of time. Furthermore, technology is playing a vital role in academics to. For instance, in contemporary settings, corona pandemic was going on, due to this, students became not able to go regularly to school for their studies. In this situation, byjus aap and zoom aap which are the parts of technology become helpful for students to study al home in guarded situation. Therefore, students become in contact with their teachers and continue their study without any difficulty and perplex.
On the other hand, there are few of demerits of technology. First of all, if individuals are used to communicate with others on the basis of their professional work, then there is more chance of, to trap in the conspiracy of cheaters which leads to many problems in their business sector and may they will become face loss. As a result, their business may become destructive.
To recapitulate, I personally believe that there are more number of merits as compared to demerits of technology because this is too useful in all sides wheather it is professional or academic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99352750809 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87146032571 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8445885105 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24153109161 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074301795367 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794599748485 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157606974983 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373235089066 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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