In many countries, people water western style clothes ( suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why ? Is it a positive or negative development ?
In modern era, western clothes are in paradigm shift and many nations wear these type of clothes as well as it is also business for western countries. I will explore the pros and cons of western style clothes and try to draw some conclusion.
I will starting look at some positive things about western dress up and the major plus point is, all western nations are developed therefore masses give more preference to western style. Whereas, it is main mode of business for western countries to export clothes. For instance, more people wear informal clothes to feel comfortable and some individuals who has white colour job they wear formal clothes. Moreover, it is a symbol of status and mordenistations. Furthermore, youngsters more prefer western dress up and it is also a symbol of equality education and financial status.
On the flip side, this notion has also negative development. Teenagers forget their culture and they do not prefer to wear traditional clothes. Because their views consider that, these are uncomfortable and old styled. Therefore, traditional clothes are becoming extinct. Youngsters should wear these clothes on traditional festivals owing to this, they do not forget their culture. They should not imitate the western nation dress up.
To conclude, although, it is positive development for western business, yet, it is also negative development for whom they forget their culture due to western style clothes. I personally believe that, people should wear western clothes but not all the time. They should balance all the things.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...d try to draw some conclusion. I will starting look at some positive things about west...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22310756972 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70370906307 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521912350598 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.287237157 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318204627557 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103457201568 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716388236587 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213100171188 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405596524513 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...d try to draw some conclusion. I will starting look at some positive things about west...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22310756972 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70370906307 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521912350598 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.287237157 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318204627557 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103457201568 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716388236587 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213100171188 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405596524513 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.