Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think that people should be free to choose. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Dangerous sports become hot potatoes in today's modern era. Therefore, some individuals believe that, the sports which involve danger, these should restricted. However, few masses think that, individuals should be independent while choosing any sport. According to my opinion, the former view is more supportive and both the views are justified in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, according to few number of people, life is a precious gift, therefore dangerous sports should prohibited. There are few reasons behind this. First of all, the major reason is that, these sports become hilarious to the lives of people. For instance, in Spain, bull fighting is too popular to their bravery. But, in this sport, individual fights with bull. Due to this, the individual may trap in around catastrophic death, while fighting with bull. Because, sometimes, the horns of the bull digs into the lungs of opposition fighter. As a result, mass loses their life due to this reason.
In controversy, some masses and I personally believe that, individuals should individualistic to choose any sport. The first and foremost reason is free to fear. If people select sports according to their choise, then they become able to come out from their fear. For instance, some people suffer from hydrophobia, in which they have frightened from water. However, if they choose sports related to water such as swimming, river rafting and so on, then they resist their phobia. As a result, this become too helpful for them in their life to, whenever they stuck into situations related to hydro. Furthermore, the another factor is challenge. In contemporary settings, most of the persons prefer challenges and they identify them as the aim of their lives. In this criteria, people hire professional to become experts in such sports. As a result, they become more confident and self-motivated.
To recapitulate, according to my outlook, although some sports should be prohibited, however, there are some positive aspects to choose sports freely such as resistance from phobia, accepting challenges and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24550898204 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73954549906 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526946107784 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6133950319 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1739130435 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5217391304 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245375967661 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649395059083 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754824666191 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172946023068 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100827158141 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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