The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary settings, traffic jams and transportation become significant issue. Therefore, the effective manner to clear up this cause is to discourage the people which are migrate from rural areas to metropolitans. I completely disagree with the statement and reasons are explained in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays individuals want comfortable life with all aspects. Hence, more number of masses migrate from countryside to cities. The first and foremost reason behind this criteria is lack of facilities. In rural areas, there is lack of education and medical facilities and so on. Due to which, people start migration foe their comfort lives. In this criteria, if legal authorities provide such services to the public of these area rather than to discourage the people from migration then people become able to fulfill their all necessities. Secondly, people move due to their jobs issues to. Because, most of the people travel long distance for their jobs to reach their offices. Due to which, every individual have their own automobiles and they utilise these once to reach their destination. Therefore, these transport release harmful gases into the atmosphere and also leads to traffic jams. On contrast, authorities need to infrastructed industries into rural areas , dur to which, this becomes easy for them to travel and also finding paid works.
Furthermore, the another factor of this criteria is based on their daily necessities such as groceries and so on. In this manner, people move towards the cities for easy availablity of all items and due to this, they use their private vehicles which leads to traffic jams and likewise various issues. However, if legal authorities improve road connective system, infrastructure of rural areas band provide public transport facility rather than to discourage aspect. Hence, this also solve the issue of transportation and traffic.
To recapitulate , I personally consider that there are plenty of ways by which legal authorities can solve these causes such as public transport facility , quality education, job and hospitality services and so on in countryside areas in comparison to discourage the individuals from migrate to metropolitans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42774566474 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9290703936 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3422330096 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8421052632 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193298815714 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060443116968 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521947735744 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137321613024 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225813441741 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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