In past museums stored information about the culture and history. However, nowadays this information can be found on internet. And, therefore, there is no need for the museum. Do you agree or disagree?
History plays a vital role in present world. Therefore, in medieval decades, the cultural and historical information was preserved in museums in the form of evidences. On contrast, in contemporary settings, internet become essential part of every life, therefore, this information is also present on all websites and can found easily. Therefore, there is no need for museums to store history. But I strongly disagree with former view and reasons behind this are explained in the paragraphs below.
To begin with, history plays a vital role in present decades because according to history, the present world is organised. Therefore, it is too important to preserve the history and culture. The first and foremost reason is knowledge and internet which people get from historical events and tools which are stored in museums. Although, they boost their knowledge through internet series also, but museums have their own unique role. Because, if people go to museums for getting information about our culture and history, then they become more attract towards their culture. Because, they watch those things and unique tools by their naked eyes. Due to this fact, they may show keen interest to know more about them.
Furthermore, museums also play am essential role in the development of the economy of a nation and also give employment to unemployment individuals. Because, if museums are still exist in contemporary settings, then this leads to great tourist attraction. Dur to this, more number of tourism visit in that country and therefore, they pay charges for transportation, accomodation and for entrance in public places such as museums. As a result, this shows a great positive aspects in the economy of a nation. In addition, if tourism will increase, then there will more need of staff in public places for better services. Hence, this become a great opportunity for unemployed youth to become employed.
To recapitulate, according to my outlook, although internet contain all information related to everything, but museums play an essential part in the society and also for the development of a nation such as upgrade in economy and employment.
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Suggestion: existed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23988439306 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80887536473 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520231213873 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7491093431 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4210526316 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281363663666 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856962515304 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685776253483 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179739395064 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761761929999 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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