The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern era, handful of people reckons that the masses should be step to migrate to the city because owing to this, transport and traffic problems are increased and migration is the most effective idea to solve this problem. I completely disagree with this notion and I will discuss the views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are plethora of reasons that tend to the masses to migrate towards cities. Tha main plus is facilities. In rural areas, facilities are not available in superior manner such as quality education, 24 hours hospitality service, electricity and water facility as well as employment problem to. Due to which, individuals moves toward the metropolitans. For instance, in 2010, government conducted the survey related to the migration of masses. This survey shown that 30% of individuals move to urban cities for employment and superior health services. Therefore, if authority provide all the facilities to countryside areas therefore people do not migrate to cities despite to discourage them for migration.
Moreover, some people mostly prefer to live in rural areas because these areas are pollution free. Whereas, cities are more polluted because there are lot of factories and also large number of automobiles which releases harmful gases into the atmosphere which leads to pollution. As well as some individuals but their own automobiles to show their financial status and use them for short distance to. Due to which, they also break traffic rules which leads to face traffic problems. Furthermore, in some countryside, there are no transport facilities due to which they face problem to reach their destination. Therefore, individuals prefer to buy their own private vehicles which leads to transport and traffic issues in cities. However, if legal authorities provide public transport facility and also improve the infrastructure of raod connective system in rural areas. This also leads to solve the problem of transportation and traffic to.
To conclude, government could not discourage the people to migrate towards urban cities whereas, if authorities provide all the services in rural areas therefore masses do not move towards the cities from suburbs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stepped'?
Suggestion: stepped
...eople reckons that the masses should be step to migrate to the city because owing to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35632183908 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82028189354 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502873563218 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9018541975 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246465031516 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705247070519 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733323616852 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165841415985 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514493587777 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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