Gay marriage law becomes an uncontrolled controversial issues in our
socitey.Many people encourage for government to accept this law while
people think that it will dirty the natural human rules between the man
and woman.
Can you explain your idea about this problem ? Discuss both views.Write
an essay at least 360 words
On the one hand, many people think that it will be fine if we accept this law. This problem can be attribute to a host of reason. Firstly, due to modernization, human has become changed both body and mind, they have many different thought about this law and now there are more and more people who are gay often appear in the daily life,Many people believed that it is an unimportant issues and regard it as a normal things.For example, today if we saw them, we do not care too much or even admire or make them as a famous person.Secondly, in all countries law, every citizens,townspeople, human are completely good treated by happiness rights, protection rights, and the rights about being cared. despite of the discrimination against them, they always fight for the rights. Thirdly, there are many people support LGBT community. This is because some people who disagree with this law are doing like being falsify for the human rights or today we have the evidence help to prove that it is truth that many famous people are gay but it is not affect on their career or their life. One the other hand, it is thought that this law are being a dirt on the natural human rules between woman and man.In fact, many people who was born back from 1990s or lower do not accept for an easy to understand reason that they has not seen any the love between two man.It is easy for them to consider this love is different but strange and someone point out that is opposite the rules. A part from that, many people are gay partly critic a normal person that they are people who are old-fashioned. And it definitely make LGBT reputation in their mind more badly.Especially, even some scientists says they find out that this people is having an significant disease although it not 100% absolutely correct.It sometimes affects to the people who read tabloid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e changed both body and mind, they have many different thought about this law and now there ar...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Many
...o are gay often appear in the daily life,Many people believed that it is an unimporta...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...ortant issues and regard it as a normal things.For example, today if we saw them, we d...
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Suggestion: For
...issues and regard it as a normal things.For example, today if we saw them, we do no...
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Suggestion: Secondly
... admire or make them as a famous person.Secondly, in all countries law, every citizens,t...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...hem as a famous person.Secondly, in all countries law, every citizens,townspeople, human ...
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Suggestion: , townspeople
...ly, in all countries law, every citizens,townspeople, human are completely good treated by h...
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Suggestion: Despite
...ghts, and the rights about being cared. despite of the discrimination against them, the...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...any famous people are gay but it is not affect on their career or their life. One the oth...
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Suggestion: In
...tural human rules between woman and man.In fact, many people who was born back fro...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... an easy to understand reason that they has not seen any the love between two man.I...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...s not seen any the love between two man.It is easy for them to consider this love ...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'points'.
Suggestion: points
...ve is different but strange and someone point out that is opposite the rules. A part ...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ho are old-fashioned. And it definitely make LGBT reputation in their mind more badl...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Especially
...GBT reputation in their mind more badly.Especially, even some scientists says they find ou...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...some scientists says they find out that this people is having an significant disease...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...hey find out that this people is having an significant disease although it not 100...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...although it not 100% absolutely correct.It sometimes affects to the people who rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, even so, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62691131498 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63270606497 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529051987768 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.887938594 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.111111111 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322407833964 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140586448375 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806914092279 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322407833964 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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