Write a paragraph of about 150 words about the values of books

Essay topics:

Write a paragraph of about 150 words about the values of books.

Books play an important role in daily life. They are the doors which help people can easily reach success because books give us knowledge and every thing in the world. It is undeniable that books provide an excellent enormous number of information by its diverse range. To illustrate, nowadays, we have many different kinds of book come from many fields such as English books, Science books, Biological books, history books and so on.These books make it easier for students to access and learn about past events, body characteristics, foreign languages or a vast space outside the earth. In addition, books help children to develop their creativity and imagination.For example, comics has gained their popularity and close to many kids all over the world. This kind of book gives children wonderful extended imagination. Besides, books are also in use of entertainment which make the laughter.Books are not only the valuable items but they also are the best friend of people.

Votes
Average: 8.5 (70 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...range. To illustrate, nowadays, we have many different kinds of book come from many fields suc...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...ological books, history books and so on.These books make it easier for students to ac...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...evelop their creativity and imagination.For example, comics has gained their popula...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Books
...f entertainment which make the laughter.Books are not only the valuable items but the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey also are the best friend of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, for example, in addition, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13836477987 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.764277943 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723270440252 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.8635918669 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0589194695757 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0184394678856 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451672874482 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589194695757 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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