Gay marriage law becomes an uncontrolled controversial issues in our
socitey.Many people encourage for government to accept this law while
people think that it will dirty the natural human rules between the man
and woman.
Can you explain your idea about this problem ? Discuss both views.Write
an essay at least 360 words
Gay marriage law has become an argument in our community.Many people think that this marriage law should be approved by government but others believe that it has changed the marriage definition between a man and a woman. This essay will discuss two points of view.
On the one hand, a group of people think that it will be perfect if authority approve this law. This point can be attributed to a host of factor. Firstly, due to modern life, human has become changed both body and mind, they have many different thought about this law and currently, there are more and more people who are gay often appear in the daily life. A large number of people believed that it is an unimportant issues and regard it as a normal thing. For example, today if we saw them, we do not pay attention too much or even admire or make them as a celebrity. Secondly, in all countries’ law, every citizens, townspeople, human are completely good treated by happiness rights, protection rights, and the rights about being cared. Notwithstanding a part of people discriminate them, they invariably fight for the rights. Thirdly, there is a crowd of people advocate for LGBT community. This is because some people disagree with this law are doing like being falsify for the human rights or today we have the evidence to prove for their right interest.It is undoubted truth that a range of distinguished people are gay but it do not impact on their career or their life.
One the other hand, it is thought that this law are changing the natural human concept between woman and man. In fact, an array of people who was born back from 1990s or lower do not accept as it is effortless to perceive the cause that they have not seen any the love between two man before. It is apparent for them to regard this love as a different thing, eccentric and someone points out that it contrast natural rules. Apart from that, a lot of people who are gay partly critic a normal person that they are old-fashioned and it leads to more inferior LGBT community reputation in their mind. Especially, even some scientists says they find out that these people is having a considerable disease although it is not 100% absolutely accurate information and it sometimes effects to the people who read tabloid.
In summary, two points above have each advantages and drawbacks.Some people said that this law should be accepted while others concern this as an unacceptable law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, apart from, even so, for example, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72941176471 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62987467961 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510588235294 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8214003756 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.235294118 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364071094195 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121561948039 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08530242865 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252937877605 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736385309611 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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