Gay marriage law becomes an uncontrolled controversial issues in our
socitey.Many people encourage for government to accept this law while
people think that it will dirty the natural human rules between the man
and woman.
Can you explain your idea about this problem ? Discuss both views.Write
an essay at least 360 words
On the one hand, many people think that it will be fine if we accept this law. This problem can be attribute to a host of reason. Firstly, due to modernization, human has become changed both body and mind, they have many different thought about this law and now there are more and more people who are gay often appear in the daily life. Many people believed that it is an unimportant issues and regard it as a normal thing. For example, today if we saw them, we do not care too much or even admire or make them as a famous person. Secondly, in all countries’ law, every citizens, townspeople, human are completely good treated by happiness rights, protection rights, and the rights about being cared. Despite of the discrimination against them, they always fight for the rights. Thirdly, there are many people support LGBT community. This is because some people who disagree with this law are doing like being falsify for the human rights or today we have the evidence help to prove that it is truth that many famous people are gay but it is not affect on their career or their life. One the other hand, it is thought that this law are being a dirt on the natural human rules between woman and man. In fact, many people who was born back from 1990s or lower do not accept for an easy to understand reason that they have not seen any the love between two man. It is easy for them to consider this love is different but strange and someone points out that is opposite the rules. A part from that, many people are gay partly critic a normal person that they are people who are old-fashioned. And it definitely makes LGBT reputation in their mind more badly. Especially, even some scientists says they find out that this people is having a significant disease although it not 100% absolutely correct. It sometimes affects to the people who read tabloid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e changed both body and mind, they have many different thought about this law and now there ar...
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Line 1, column 1053, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...any famous people are gay but it is not affect on their career or their life. One the oth...
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Line 1, column 1719, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...some scientists says they find out that this people is having a significant disease ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, even so, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53731343284 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38482990544 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1810341107 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317845845317 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105867363203 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786126210187 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317845845317 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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