Gay marriage law becomes an uncontrolled controversial issues in our
socitey.Many people encourage for government to accept this law while
people think that it will dirty the natural human rules between the man
and woman.
Can you explain your idea about this problem ? Discuss both views.Write
an essay at least 360 words
Gay marriage law has become an argument in our community.Many people think that this marriage law should be approved by government but others believe that it has changed the marriage definition between a man and a woman.I totally agree with the statement that this marriage law should be approved by government.
On the one hand, a group of people presume that it will be perfect if authority approve this law. This point can be attributed to a host of factor. Firstly, due to modern life, human has become changed both body and mind, they have many different thoughts and currently, there are more and more people who are gay often appear in the daily life. A large number of people believed that it is an unimportant issues and regard it as a normal thing. For example, today if we see them, we will not pay attention or even admire them as a celebrity. Secondly, in all countries’ law, every citizens, townspeople, human are completely good treated by happiness rights, protection rights, and the rights about being cared. Notwithstanding a part of people discriminate them, they invariably fight for the rights. Thirdly, there is a crowd of people advocate for LGBT community. This is because some people disagree with this law are doing like being falsify for the human rights or today we have the evidence to prove for their right interest.It is undoubted truth that a range of distinguished people are gay but it do not impact on their career or their life.
One the other hand, it is widely believed that this law are transforming the natural human concept between woman and man. In fact, an array of people who was born back from 1990s or lower do not agree as it is effortless to perceive the cause that they have not seen any this kind of love before. It is apparent for them to regard this love as a different thing, eccentric and someone points out that it contrast natural rules. Apart from that, a lot of people who are gay partly critic a normal person that they are old-fashioned and it leads to more inferior LGBT community reputation. Especially, even some scientists find out that these people is having a considerable disease although it is not 100% absolutely accurate information and it affects to the people who read tabloid.
In conclusion, two points above have each advantages and drawbacks.Some people consider that this law should be accepted while others concern this as an unacceptable. I contend that it would be better for government to approve this law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, apart from, even so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71993621279 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506976744186 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3270162883 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.764705882 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2941176471 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362477946921 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117293800245 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076286156105 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245147911224 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533151429057 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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