German farmers sue government over missed climate targets
Environmentalist dressed as a storm cloud and a burning tree protest during a demonstration titled
Dismayedby the German government’s failure to meet climate protection targets, dairy farmer Heiner Luetke Schwienhorst has filed a lawsuit against Berlin to force it into action
“some describe this as a fight between David and Goliath. To me, that’s besides the point, “ said Schwienhorst, who suffered his poorest harvest in three decades after a record drought.
The attitude of political representatives, the way they trivialize climate targets by giving up what they have set, is something that we need to bring to political accountability. That is important, he told AFP
Together with two other farmers and Greenpeace, Scehwienhorst has launched a challenge against the German government for having “give up”[ …Karena menyerah…] trying to achieve cuts in greenhouse gas emission set out under its own climate target, as well as under European Law.
A dairy farmer near Hamburg and a livestock farmer on the North Sea Island of Pellworm have joined the first such lawsuit to seek “climate protection, not monetary compensation”
Berlin had pledged to take action to slash greenhouse gas emissions in Germany by 40 percent by 2020 compared to 1990 levels
But in its latest annual climate protection report published in June, the government admitted that it was now expecting to achieve 32 percent in reductions compared to 1990
The shortfall 0f 8 percentage points is equivalent to about 100 million tonnes of carbon dioxide.
“It was clear in the climate protection report that government is not planning to taker further measures in order to reach the target. Instead, it has simply given up” said Anike Peters of Greenpeace.
“we’re saying we’re not going to accept this. Because it’s not about a lack of technical possibilities to reach the target, rather it’s about a lack of political will
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56026058632 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21384988373 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651465798046 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.422935192 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.666666667 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175030738139 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074882958188 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645695941622 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683080711218 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672205883424 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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