Global warming is one of the biggest treats to our environment- what causes global warming- what solutions are there to problem

Essay topics: Global warming is one of the biggest treats to our environment

- what causes global warming
- what solutions are there to problem

parth patidar's picture

Nowadays global warming affected the living of people and society to great extant.However,it is most dangerous problem for our environment.causes and possible solutions to this situation are discussed in the following paragraphs.

There are numbers of reasons behind this situation.One the main causes of this problem is that green house effects and fossil gas emissions created more carbon dioxide in the climate .another reason is that increasing population and increasing use of private vehicles that creates lots of contamination in the atmosphere. A third causes of the problem is that developing more and more industries and also in some county government also support industrialization and construction project and lots of chemical industries produce dangerous emission which is very impairment for human as well as other lives of planet.Finally , rapidly growths in deforestation .For instance, for air port development they require big amount of land so they cut down more and more trees which is effects the our weather pattern.

On the other hand there are some steps that we should under take in order to change this situation.First of all, simple solution is that government should develop better education system and also parents and teachers should encourage children to do more and more plantations.A second measure is that government make strict jurisprudence and they should give heavy panelty to factories who create lots of emission .Thirdly, people developed self awareness like they use eco-friendly vehicles such as , bicycle for shorts distance and use public transportation and avoid use of personal vehicles also people should celebrate environment days.

In conclusion, it is true that global warming is one of the most problem on earth which is detriment for our environment .This is very serious problem.However,it is not only liability of government but also individual and they cannot escape from it and both should follow reduce, reuse, and recycling processes.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, second, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49675324675 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.173296818 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.869465853 49.4020404114 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 338.6 106.682146367 317% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.6 20.7667163134 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.6 7.06120827912 462% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149543499036 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107715914249 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931543267195 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128320455176 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937769112303 0.056905535591 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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