Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue

Essay topics:

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Global warming is a heated issue that has seriously damaging impacts on natural and human life worldwide. There are some reasons for this phenomenon and several main measures that could be implemented by both Government and individuals to tackle the problems.
The global warming mainly stems from the greenhouse emissions and overpopulation. The greenhouse gas released from the process of industrial production and vehicle as well as burning of fossil fuels is the main cause of greenhouse effect. It make the temperature of the Earth increase at an alarming rate which leads to destructive natural disasters such as smelting glaciers, and climate change. Besides, overpopulation also contributes to the increase of global temperature. More people are, more forest could be destroyed to do agriculture or to build the high rise apartments. The increase in number of people leads to the increase in need of energy and level of emissions. It contribute a large portion to the climate change.
In order to solve the global warming problems, some main solutions should be done by both government and citizens. From the perspective of politicians, they should invest more in researches to find the renewable resource which replace the fossil fuels. The public programs also should be promoted to raise the awareness of people in environmental issues and how to protect the Earth. Moreover, they should issue more regulars which require that factories emission should be processed before being release into the air. From the perspective of individual, some small actions could be done to contribute to solve this problems are saving energy, planting more trees or commuting by public transportation.
In conclusion, there are some reason why the temperature of the Earth continuously increase which inflict damage impacts on ecosystem. Therefore, the Government have to cooperate with habitants to tackle this serious issues to protect the Earth and human life.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'contributes'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37337662338 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9198313875 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0325951713 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168261066843 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617397544118 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739130705636 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125083944471 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759651394115 0.056905535591 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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