Government around the world should stop spending billions of dollars on space research while there are millions people living below poverty line on planet earth. To what extent do you agree?
Space research which requires billions of dollars has been becoming a common phenomenon of governments of different countries around the world where as millions of inhabitants of those countries are deprived of basic living necessities. Though uncovering the mystery of space is a need for humans for future safety and survival, most government do this for business, political, educational and technological purposes. With the advancement of technology nations are being dependent on commercial satellites for telecommunication, security satellites for monitoring and defense and some other satellites for weather forecast, air and marine trafficking. Business information like demand of products, reaching product information to consumer; rising social awareness and motivational information transferring to general people; different educational program on agriculture and food processing; health, illness and disease prevention methods, safety procedures and many other livelihood issues are being broadcasted in the media through commercial satellite which has common citizen interest. Moreover, weather forecast allows people to prepare before disaster hence minimizes damage of assets and loss of lives. Furthermore, online educational programs run by different universities saves money and time by which education and information became accessible to remote community using telecommunication satellite. On the other hand space research budget is a very little amount compared to huge annual costs of governments which has very tiny impact on their expenditure and affordability. In addition to these governments can grow revenue from rents of commercial satellites to enhance their national growth. So expenses on space research are not a waste of money rather it is a necessity for the governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26123579563 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647286821705 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.6240064904 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.0 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121627848612 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536717501956 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657271526243 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121627848612 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.11 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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