Government funding should only provide scholarships for best students. All other funding should come from student fees and private organisations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many universities always spend large amount of money in scholarship which aim to encourage those students who get best grade in various filed. Some people believe that the government funding toward college should only as scholarships resources for best students and the other funding needed should be provided by private organizations or students’ fees.
From my perspective, the scholarships could both be provided by person or government, and those money can also be spent in other aspect if is needed. It should not be strictly required. And the governments’ funding should also help disadvantaged students so that they can continues their study.
Those best students who get top grade in faculty or creative useful things are deserved be given money as scholarships. It also can encourage other students to work hard in the next semester. However, governments also aim to support students who come from poor family. If more people can receive higher education, the whole nation will benefits from that in numerous ways. Many universities which located in developed countries can give free fund to poor students, thus students with potentials will not be barred from universities simply because they cannot pay the bill.
Also, if the university spend government financial support in other aspects, it can make study fund lower so that more number of people may have chance to entering the college. Some people wish to pick up books again even though they live under poverty line. A university aim is not merely to prepare students for work head. College education could cultivate the mind of the student and enhance their overall abilities. So education is not aim of earning money.
Overall, government funding should not only be used in rewarding the best students. By using those money in other field, the cost of advanced study could lower so that more people can enter the university to reach their dream.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...e provided by person or government, and those money can also be spent in other aspect if is...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'continue'
Suggestion: continue
...disadvantaged students so that they can continues their study. Those best students ...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to be'
Suggestion: to be
... or creative useful things are deserved be given money as scholarships. It also ca...
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Line 9, column 337, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...higher education, the whole nation will benefits from that in numerous ways. Many univer...
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Line 17, column 94, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...n rewarding the best students. By using those money in other field, the cost of advanced st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21405750799 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72199222977 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533546325879 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7913841698 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295357493964 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104590060349 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110985410614 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194376086402 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903361630097 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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