Public services decides the growth of a nation over all, but arts and music have a significant role in improving a society spiritually.Some people believes the money spend for arts and music is a mere waste.However, i strongly believe government should spent money for art and music as well , as it is important for the spiritual growth of its citizens
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It has to be accepted , the primary focus of governments is to develop public services and lead the country to progress. governments have to spend enough money on infrastructure development, education and health care sector.However the money for defense, arms and ammunition is unnecessary. the people of the country gains nothing from this.For example, a nation like India spends the majority of its annual budget for buying arms and ammunition.
on the other hand several arguments can put forward in favour of spending foe music and arts. First of all, the income for artists and singers are too low they cannot survive without government help. If the government offer no support to them their families will end up in poverty.Secondly, music and other art forms gives positivity to life so the money spends on this will help to attain mental growth to citizens. It is proved that , the strength songs and art forms which helps to improve patriotism .
To conclude, it is undoubtedly say that ,the money spends for arts and music is not a loss to any nation as it is helps in many ways to improve a nation
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.306273062731 0.247107183377 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.151291512915 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.070110701107 0.0946595960268 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0369003690037 0.0501214627716 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0369003690037 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110701107011 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0184501845018 0.0403226058552 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.88221688354 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0442804428044 0.0326793684256 135% => OK
Particles: 0.00369003690037 0.00163938923432 225% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0959409594096 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0184501845018 0.021408717616 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00369003690037 0.011925033212 31% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1475.0 1933.35771543 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 316.048096192 81% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78431372549 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321568627451 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219607843137 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152941176471 0.203846283523 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101960784314 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88221688354 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.037074148 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556862745098 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.1733361222 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0891783567 56% => OK
Sentence length: 28.3333333333 20.7743622355 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.7429009146 49.517814964 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.888888889 127.492653851 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7743622355 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.814263465372 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 3.99599198397 526% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.2941176471 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.93442622951 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379764680371 0.332605444948 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149353823291 0.102741220458 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0864938578307 0.0668466124924 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.664494726764 0.534860350844 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.205292613639 0.148594505496 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178061518028 0.134430193775 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681136586771 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.363296459251 0.324371583561 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0186754917138 0.0638462369009 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2650921439 0.228012699653 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370701894028 0.058150111329 64% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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