The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree?
Violence has been a part of television and movies for as long as television and films have existed, and the issue of whether the level of media violence should be restricted by the government has been the subject of considerable debate in last decades. In my opinion, I agree the government should take appropriate measure to deal with media violence.
On the one hand, there are some positive sides of TV and movie violence. Firstly, through watching violence on television programs and films, people can learn about the world. For example, some movies contain some violence, but they reflect thin...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-04 | shubhi.kala | 63 | view |
- Many people believe that an effective public transport system is key component of a modern city Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages 80
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? 70
- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? 70
- More people have unhealthy diet and do not do enough exercises What are the reasons for this How can we encourage people to have healthier lifestyle 74
- Some people say that advertisement targeting children may have negative effects on them and suggest banning such advertisement as a solution To what extent do you agree or disagree 59
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1507 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.877 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.553 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.769 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.276 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.392 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.644 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5