The government should control the internet to reduce cyber crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often argued that government should control the internet to decrease number of cyber-violence and gives security to users. I think government control these types of crime is a good decision but not only government can prevent these things even people should try to use internet in a safe way and follow the saftey rules that can also prevent to dangerous things via internet.
On the one hand, government should aware to use internet. When government taking action to control cyber crime than automatically internet would be in safe zone. For instance, government take actions against internet froude as early as possible. Even it create individual department of cyber cell in every city to control internet crime. Moreover, encourage to people by giving some knowledge that how to use internet in safe way. Meanwhile, government should ban such type of sites which are dangerous for children and youth. Make some law and give punishment to those people who serves sensitive post, comment on social sites.
On the other hand, people should be aware while using internet because not only government can control cyber crime. For example, parents take care of children and check the activity of kids when they using internet. Even youth also aware of using social sites and read saftey rules and create full privacy in his account and make strong password for social site or for net banking as well. people do not give any personal information to stranger on social site. Fruthermore, parents do not give permission to create account on social sites to the children who are under eighteen year old. These types of awareness can also prevent by cyber crime.
In conclusion, government can help people to reduce cyber crime even people also be aware to using internet so both are important to stop cyber crime in fast manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... even people should try to use internet in a safe way and follow the saftey rules that can al...
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...overnment should aware to use internet. When government taking action to control cyb...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...et froude as early as possible. Even it create individual department of cyber cell in ...
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Message: Did you mean 'peopling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: peopling
...rol internet crime. Moreover, encourage to people by giving some knowledge that how to us...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...social site or for net banking as well. people do not give any personal information to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47175509326 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493464052288 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8591684006 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245835042867 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103297672034 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755823063302 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18285924773 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407671839371 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.