The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber-crime and ensure safety of users.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In contemporary times, the internet is the largest wonder, while sometimes it is considered as a basic need of human life. Today to do our daily work mostly we have to depend on the internet such as online banking, transforming information and so on. Due to excessive use of the internet sometimes we have to face different difficulties such as hacking, cyber-bullying etc. Therefore, I think that the government should maintain the usage.
To begin with, the accessibility and availability of the internet increases the cyber crime rate because people always find new ways to commit crimes. For example, in social media they create false news and advertise in a way so that people feel interested to enter in this link. In this way they hack the account and get information even if sometimes they hack the gmail account and use this to commit serious crime. In addition, they design fraudulent websites giving some alluring offers, as a result when people browse these online portals they hack their devices and get all personal information from those gadgets.
Moreover, sometimes they send bomber emails to the businessmen for blackmailing them to take money forcefully. Furthermore, young stars can easily become addicted with the pronographic websites which can spoil their life both physically and mentally. According to a research, there are many criminal activities such as rape is increasing in socity due to the influence of these websites. Whatsmore, many adolescents become victims of cyber crime and committed suicide. For instance, 2017 many people committed suicide by playing a game named blue whale. The game seduce people to commit suicide by creating excitement in them.
In conclusion, the internet makes our life easier because using it people can do official work remotely. But the government should monitor the usage and block those suspicious websites which can be harmful to people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'peoples'?
Suggestion: peoples
... makes our life easier because using it people can do official work remotely. But the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23051948052 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79171507281 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8376094402 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136953397988 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462393141146 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396859552102 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837662337052 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288055172413 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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