The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often argued that people want to travel with a group, whereas others prefer to travel alone. I think it is depend on people's choice because both are having their own advantages or disadvantages.
Admittedly, travelling in a group is much more easier to make all arrangements. Tour guide arrange all the facilities which we need, it is their responsibility to book travel tickets, reserve hotel rooms to stay, provide food and many more. Even if trip is booked through travel agencies there is more chance of getting discounts. Whereas, travelling alone does not provide any of these facilities. Additionally, by travelling in tour guide can know more about historical events, plethora of places, popular destinations, culture, language etc. For instance, few months back me and my family visited USA and there we went with tour guide to visit popular destinations. It was very comfortable for us to travel without any worries related to arrangements and safety. We enjoyed the beautiful experiences with new people. With timely food and exact planned schedules for the trip. Thus, travelling with group is more beneficial.
Nevertheless, travelling alone is also prefer by people who like to plan trip by yourself. By choosing to travel alone then they can make schedules according to what they like to visit or what they do not like so according to that they can spend more time where they want also they do not have burden to follow rules or schedules that provided by tour guide. Whereas, in group travelling, travelers do not have that type of freedom. For example, if i am in India and i want to spend some extra hours at Taj Mahal, i simply can not do that with group tour but i can do that when i travel alone. Meanwhile i do not need to tolerate those person that i do not like but in group tour i can not do that. So travel alone also good for those people who do not like to interact more and more people.
In conclusion, travelling in tour guide have many benefits as well as trip to alone is also great for some people who like to travel independently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.675197932 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491758241758 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2868227564 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3157894737 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301185751765 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113017008903 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640836156282 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188325404264 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406120294104 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.