Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that authorities should provide a larger financial support for teaching science as at is the main feature of nation’s progress. Others disagree and state that there are other field that should be provided with a money. I strongly emphasise idea that field of science education should not a first priority for the government.
First of all, there are several benefits of subsidising science education. It is believed by number of people that science is capable of solving all world’s problems and it cannot be denied easily. It must be remembered that due to inventions and discoveries in medicine, longevity of people increased, as well as overall quality of life. Moreover, these days there is a serious problem of pollution and thus it could be solved only if country will have enough people who could find a solution for this problem. On the other hand, it cannot be said that only a science is the cornerstone for the development of the country. It is also important to subsidise language education in country, otherwise there would be no benefits from having dozens of well prepared scientists, because they could not be able to participate in international researches. Furthermore, culture and arts it is also vital for civilised human-being, since it brings society together and is crucial for instilling moral values.
Taking everything into consideration, science is undoubtably important part of nation’s progress and there needs to be people who are knowledgeable in it, but it share an equal importance with other fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24901185771 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99211313636 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9635297576 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150034661167 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690742104132 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695360209158 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112371588192 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057510826788 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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