The government should lower the budget on the arts in order to allocate more money to education.
To what extent do you agree?
It is an irrefutable truth that arts add an essence to human's life. However, some people accord that instead of spending money on arts, government should redirect this budget to upgrade the educational system of a country. I completely disagree with the notion, as I believe, equal money should be spent on both the areas, since both play a crucial role in the growth of a country.
To commence with, on the one hand, undoubtedly, government should allocate a huge sum of money for the upgradation of education system, as there are multitude benefits of it. The foremost one is that children are the future of any nation and to make the future brighter the foundation should be the strongest. For example, if a child gets the best education facility, then he would be able to gather more knowledge and become more qualified. Consequently, In the future, he can use the knowledge and his credentials to serve the country. Undoubtedly, it will help in uplifting the economy of a country.
On the other hand, I would argue that art is as significant as education, so required fund should be provided by authorities for its preservation. Art helps to exhibit the culture of a region and also, it provides knowledge as well as a base to the researchers to dig deep in the history.for example, a museum in Amritsar which is based on Sikh religion's history, is visited by many people, who are interested to know about the past of this religion. At the same time, this museum exhibits the sikh culture. Moreover, art is the best way to raise voice against injustice in the society by using illustrations and symbols, and without using words. Hence, arts is as crucial as education and governments should equally focus on both of them.
In summary, art is vital to provide an identity to a country by exhibiting its culture and past. Whereas education helps a country to grow with more educated people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: religions'; religion's
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, for example, in summary, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78419452888 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78841545698 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3693814961 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223250269374 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734659781246 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680174220955 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135706561783 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226375089086 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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