A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have differing views with regard to the question of how we should behavior towards animals. While some argue that human beings have this right to employ animals to meet a range of their needs, in my view, every creature has created free.
Some people following anthropocentric approaches believe that various types of fauna should be employed to improve human's quality of life in different ways. Firstly, they argue that as the population of the world is growing, it is essential to supply their required food by developing animal husbandries to breed cows, hogs just to name. Secondly, in their point of view, being the most intelligent creature who is able to think, human has this right to use animals in doing medical research. As an obvious example, a new invented drug is not prescribed patients unless it has been tested on rats in laboratories. Finally, proponents of this idea are of the opinion that animals are the best alternative to entertain people, particularly children. Because, in comparison to machines, they are live and can be more attractive for the public.
In spite of what mentioned above, supporters of animal's rights, including me, believe that other species have also this right to live according to their instinct. In fact, it would be not ethical if humankind put animal under pressure to obey his desirable rules, just for meeting human satisfaction. In addition, anthropocentrism should not be caused other creatures to be exploited, meaning that under no condition should mankind prioritize his requests, like food need, on top of animal's rights. In my view, in this case, if we try to be vegetarian, not only we will be healthier, but we can also respect animal's right to live. As a result, an appropriate balance is made in our ecosystem.
In conclusion, although it seems that thanks to the intellect in human, he is known as dominated creature between others, I believe that this ability should not be used to ignore animal's rights.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ke food need, on top of animals rights. In my view, in this case, if we try to be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my view, in spite of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98791540785 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77426942817 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589123867069 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3917485168 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383436001991 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119897922439 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699224017702 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234793109835 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557716971819 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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