A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people believe that animals should be treated in the same way humans are and have similar rights, whereas others think that it is more important to use them as we desire for food and medical research. This essay will discuss both points of view.
With regard to the exploitation of animals, people believe it is acceptable for several reasons. Firstly, they think that humans are the most important beings on the planet, and everything must be done to ensure human survival. If this means experimenting on animals so that we can fight and find cures for diseases, then this takes priority over animal suffering. Furthermore, it is believed by some that animals do not feel pain or loss as humans do, so if we have to kill animals for food or other uses, then this is morally acceptable.
However, I do not believe these arguments stand up to scrutiny. To begin, it has been shown on numerous occasions by secret filming in laboratories via animal rights groups that animals feel as much pain as humans do, and they suffer when they are kept in cages for long periods. In addition, a substantial amount of animal research is done for cosmetics, not to find cures for diseases, so this is unnecessary. Finally, it has also been proven that humans can get all the nutrients and vitamins that they need from green vegetables and fruit. Therefore, again, having to kill animals for food is not an adequate argument.
To sum up, although some people argue killing animals for research and food is ethical, I would argue there is sufficient evidence to demonstrate that this is not the case, and, therefore, steps must be taken to improve the rights of animals
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'in addition', 'to sum up', 'with regard to', 'in the same way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211180124224 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.208074534161 0.155533422707 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0683229813665 0.0946595960268 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0652173913043 0.0501214627716 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0465838509317 0.0437548338989 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127329192547 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0403726708075 0.0403226058552 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51840841765 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0341614906832 0.0326793684256 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00621118012422 0.00163938923432 379% => OK
Determiners: 0.0621118012422 0.0861772015684 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0217391304348 0.021408717616 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00621118012422 0.011925033212 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1664.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75778546713 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332179930796 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231833910035 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152249134948 0.203846283523 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0968858131488 0.137316102897 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51840841765 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.5217533071 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0833333333 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3731140051 49.517814964 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.666666667 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.814263465372 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 47.2667243368 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.18446601942 1.69124875643 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467269745046 0.332605444948 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0863596697048 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.077408268198 0.0668466124924 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529313229749 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209890054414 0.148594505496 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183962771167 0.134430193775 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111514737167 0.0742795772207 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.378142693823 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0458390437596 0.0638462369009 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340408744931 0.228012699653 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036394886194 0.058150111329 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.