The growing number people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved.
Some people think that tge best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical lessons in the school curriculum.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Oweing to the problems of obesity which is bieng escalating enormously. However, many people consider that school should start such programmes and clasaes in the curriculum.In my opinion, i completely agree that this would reduce the health problems.
To begin with, pupil usually start gaining their weight at the age of below twenty, sometimes weight issues comes in contact in early stage of adoloscents.So it is eminent that schools should increase the extracurriculum sports activities and other physical education related events should also be assigned.As we know that many schools has recently opened the yoga and gym facilities which have huge range of equipments to loss weight,increase height and so on.Hence, by doing these changes ang giving opportunity to students would play pivotal role so hey would access to learn about ecercises to stay fit.
Moreover, their must be some campaigns and programmes in the school schedules which would give the chance to the students to participate and release theor strength by watching these events other would also like to follow that same path.Therefore, it would result in changing the eating habbits.Furthermore,the family members of the children will also like to give them company and would motivate and appreciate.Hence,this would led to reduce the health issues in the families too and would successful as long lasting effect.
All in all what have been discussed above i pen down by saying that these physical awareness and classes would led to reduce the deteriorating health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37704918033 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12824945274 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 215.093839986 49.4020404114 435% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.4 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8 20.7667163134 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098434566124 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613301407509 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393955427858 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685254303538 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401144314949 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.0946893788 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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