Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To today's modern lifestyle, money is central to everything. Some section of society, have a belief that, abundant cash and little time for self is acceptable and favourable than having meagre money and lot of leisure time. To my mind, I partially agree to both views. this essay will thoroughly explain both points of views and confirm on opinion.
Take a first case, wherein person has more cash, and in order to have and maintain that surplus cash, he or she does not have personal or family time. For example, a CEO or entrepreneur working overtime to keep on adding cash to account, ruining personal space and work-life balance. consequently that person may end up having fatigue to his body and mind.
Now consider another case, where a common man who has less cash flow into his account and have a surplus time. what kind of lifestyle this man can afford? These types of people often end up in non fulfilling basic obligations toward his family.he remains constantly worried about meeting two end. Although he may have lot of spare time, he can not use it effectively due to lack of money. Thus this person also remains disturbed and unsatisfied.
So what should be ideal situation one can have? balanced approach towards money and free time can be remedy. Running behind money should not exceed limit in order to accommodate leisure time with loved ones.
To sum up, its in hand of everyone to decrease the burden of work and creat quality time for self and family. person should have a clear cut mindset of priorities in life, then only life will be successful on both parameters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80144404332 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43737124467 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635379061372 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6915178658 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2352941176 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312700158214 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867640824603 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729366000598 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162265595772 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642585272329 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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