Nowadays most people are not fit and active enough, compared to the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
Currently everybody is having hectic work schedule. When we compare current people’s lifestyle with older generation, we found that current generation is having unhealthy lifestyle, and day-by-day they are becoming inactive, which is worsening their health further.
Nowadays people are facing with tremendous work pressure, mainly due to project completion deadlines and targets. Everyday they are travelling to office either by company bus of private car through a big traffic jam and pollution on roads. Most of the time, they have to carry incomplete work to home and even have to work on holidays. This continues year-on-year, and takes toll on their health. Many gets detected with high blood pressure and other psychological disorders.
There are also other reasons to health disturbances. Most of professionals have a desk job, means they have to sit on laptop or computer and finish their work. For example information technology engineers. If a person don’t walk in whole day, how he can burn his calories? And these peoples are only adding more calories by eating junk food like pizza, burger and so on. Their breakfast, lunch has a high sugary items and cold drinks. This overall trend is making them aligned to diseases such as diebetis.
This was not a case of older generanation. Most of them had a physical work. They were not pressurized to complete task in given time and junk food had not spoiled them. They has good habits like exercise and walking. The overall lifestyle was active and healthy.
To sum up, possible solutions are to remove time for self for regular exercise, yoga, avoid junk food, have a movement of body every hour, avoid sugary items and eat fresh fruits and vegetables.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean 'every day, they'?
Suggestion: Every day, they
...oject completion deadlines and targets. Everyday they are travelling to office either by comp...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...and other psychological disorders. There are also other reasons to health disturbances. Most of...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the professionals') or simply say ''Most professionals''.
Suggestion: Most of the professionals; Most professionals
...o other reasons to health disturbances. Most of professionals have a desk job, means they have to sit...
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Line 13, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...physical work. They were not pressurized to complete task in given time and junk ...
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Line 13, column 177, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...nd junk food had not spoiled them. They has good habits like exercise and walking. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16607773852 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68261420705 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660777385159 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.799032417 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.15 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0952572879257 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268649169777 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299374655916 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494491643133 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195854483969 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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