All educational facilities should be funded by the government To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answers

Essay topics:

All educational facilities should be funded by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers.

In today’s modern society, institutions and universities are always craving for consistent flow of funding for upgrading their facilities and sustaining in cut-throat competition. Some citizens feels that all such educational bodies should be financially supported by bureaucrats or state rulers. I believe this partially, which is being explained in following essay.
In majority of countries, it was and is a time tested remedy to fund and support educational facilities, mainly to allow talended poor students to carry out their education hasslefree and in enriched way. While getting aid from government departments, these institutes have to follow stringent norms and be consistent in their policy towards delivery of knowledge. For instance, AICTE is govt body which regulates technical education colleges in India. These institutes have to report on quarterly basis. Thus, major energy of management gets wasted in doing such monotonous work, allowing less time for their obligation towards students. Such students may get on paper good impression of government aided institute but may fail in practical life after education.
This may not be case for non-aided institutes, as most of them are either supported by industries or some organizations. And may also get deemed university or autonomous status. Take case of famous UDCT institute in Mumbai, which runs wholely on pharma research projects from industry. In total, students from these colleges are more versatile, are exposed to practical aspect of education. Non-support by govt is in a way boon to these institutes for getting free hand in handling students and making them more competitive. For example, Autonomous college engineering student won award for electric car in Pune city.
To sum up, institutes should seek need based govt funding, subsequent regulations in order to work more flexibly in today’s competitive world.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'feel'.
Suggestion: feel
...n cut-throat competition. Some citizens feels that all such educational bodies should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54639175258 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98025924753 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9297702626 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157111114877 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510350918512 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405358559085 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098847705035 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638503406849 0.056905535591 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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