Some people say that historical buildings should be knocked down, while others believe that they should be preserved and restored instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some development oriented individuals, bureacrats and politicians are of opinion that historical buildings should be knocked down. However I am of the view that by preserving and restoring such buildings, we can carry forward historical facts to our future generations.
Society is filled with all types of people, so its obvious that so called 'Modern mindset' people thinks that historical buildings and monuments are hampering growth of region or city. But they must rethink what kind of society they want without historical building or rather without preserving history.
History and culture makes any society rich, there is much to share with other countries about our history and associated buildings. But if there will not be any such monuments left, we can not teach history to our future generation without substance/ references.
In India, for preservation and restoration of historical buildings, there is a seperate body known as 'Archeological Society of India'. It can only take care of buildings, which are assigned to them. So what about other historical buildings? here comes role of common man and owners of such buildings. They have to be positive about preserving, then things are possible.
One such outcry and processions happened recently in our Pune city. This happened to avoid knocking down old home of Savitribai Phule - India's first women educationist - who started education for womens. Administration have to note down importance of building and ordered preservation.
To sum up, historical buildings are very important gift to our society. And we can only give justice to them is by preserving them. Our future generations can understand history better due to such buildings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45149253731 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93854755422 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8797275967 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238407901549 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075930537716 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822637080203 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125145034885 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915615242136 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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