Human Activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discus both views and give your opinion.
Activities done by human beings put a bad effect on plants and animals around the entire globe because of which they are now on verge of extinct. There is a thinking that people cannot atop doing these. However there is a group of people who opines that it can be changed by taking various steps.
There is no doubt that due to masses, it is becoming insane for plants and animals to live their life. Because of pollution produced by people, other living creatures face many difficulties in their growth even they die before completing their life cycle. Moreover, animals are losing their freedom by getting caught in cage by humans for their entertainment.
Although, there are several ways to gave them their rights as we have. Strict laws can be made by authorities for protecting animals from hunting. If people gave donation to NGO working for the protection of plants and animals then they might be saved from being eloped.
According to me, other living creatures have to protect by making possible steps but they should be consumed by people for balancing of ecosystem because life can only be maintained if all the creatures are in balance in nature.
To sum up, plants and animals have been affected by human activities but if both people and government try their best to protect them then they can be saved from becoming extinct.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e by humans for their entertainment. Although, there are several ways to gave them th...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ey might be saved from being eloped. According to me, other living creatures have to protect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, then, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83189655172 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40326753761 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3251984954 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.909090909 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236328408413 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101296785262 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594154838673 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14981996828 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634206622078 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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