Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Most of the people prefer sticking to the daily routine, whereas others always push their boundaries to change their status quo as they believe that the change would bring more benefits. In my opinion, I certainly agree to step outside of the comfort zone, and try new things.
Beyond doubt, there are several compelling reasons why some people there not try new things and instead, fear embracing the change. Firstly, desi and intrinsic value in doing that. In other words, they have a lifelong passion for what they do everyday. To quote an instance, a Naval officer is happy with his job despite little earnings. What he wishes from his job is the level of satisfaction and recognition. secondly, others may fear the uncertainty that prevents them from trying new things. For example, a father with infinite family responsibilities may become risk averse because even if he gets convinced to change, he would fear if he receives the same amount of earnings and satisfaction that he got in the previous job. Such human psyche itself speaks of why people embrace repetition.
There is a school of thought that believes change is imperative. They believe that trying new things could bring exciting experiences and kill boredom and a sense of complacency. For example, we would not have known much about other planets if astronauts were not sent into the outer space. Additionally, it is believed that making the change in the life fortifies talent or characteristics. It simply allows people to move past their limiting beliefs. It is therefore essential that the boundaries and assumptions must be pushed and tested. A sprinter would not know how fast he is until he participates in the competition.
In conclusion, I second my outlook of embracing a change rather than fearing it despite legitimate reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... level of satisfaction and recognition. secondly, others may fear the uncertainty that p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nto the outer space. Additionally, it is believed that making the change in the l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76065541291 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607973421927 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8110229495 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144496521422 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400667970558 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454176766441 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844926293508 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427515962695 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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