The incidents of juvenile delinquency are increasing day by day. What could be its reasons. Which is better, counseling or punishing?
There is no doubt that changing of lifestyle put a great impact on the behavior of teenagers. Due to these, crimes committed by students are increasing at an alarming rate. But, it can be controlled by counselling them or giving punishment if needed.
There are many factors responsible for this increase. The prominent one is their financial needs like expensive bikes, clothes which requirerequires a lot of money that cannot be given to them by their parents. To fulfill these requirements, they start to do crimes such as chain snatching and robbery and so on. Moreover, youngsters think that no one is more than them. For instance if any teacher punish them for their mistake, they started to quarreling with him or sometimes fight with him because their ego is more important for them.
On the other hand, instead of giving punishment to juniors, there should be counseling classes where they can know about the struggle of their parents to provide them better education and facilities and giving them advice in such a way that they can easily understand the bad effects of crimes or show off done by them. Because, if they receive punishment then this will affect them mentally or lead children to the wrong way.
To sum up, it is possible to decrease the incidents of juvenile delinquency by providing them proper knowledge or through counseling but also they will be given punishment on several crimes so that other teenagers will learn from it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92712550607 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67266586295 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6222267902 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.636363636 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138498199937 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502790001446 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594242018174 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999996694026 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555154477591 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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