If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished? State your answer and give your reasons.
Sabikunnahar Rony
Sun, Apr 5, 10:16 PM (9 hours ago)
to me
Children acquire their basic and primary knowledge from their parents who provide initial elements of getting such knowledge. These days, there is a debate that whether parents are responsible for their misdeeds and should they be punished because of their wrong doings.I strongly believe that, if juveniles do any misdoings their parents should take the responsibility as they bring their children in this world. There are ample reasons that sorrounded my opinion.
Firstly, according to me, parents should take proper care to their child's grow up as they bring them on the earth so it is their own responsibility to brought them up properly. As they are child they have no knowledge about any bad activities and also they are unaware about anything that is against morality. They are parents who should teach their pagony and spend with them a quantity of time. In this present days, Father along with their mother work in outside so that they are not able to allocate their time properly with their children. However, their children did not get proper guidance from them and they try to spend most of their times by watching TV,chatting with friends sometimes their parents keep them under maid guidance. For this reason sometimes juvelines accept misdeeds as morals, for which some how their parents are responsible.
Secondly, if parents did not show any attention towards their children, they will do this wrong with their teachers and elders. When child do any mistake parents should make them aware about their such mistakes. On the other hand, they should take under punishment which must be little like : forbidden to play games with best friend or not to give their favourite dish to eat and so on. For instance, one of my neighbours went out for job keeping their ten years daughter under the care of house maid. As a result this girl uesd to do misbehave with her parents under wrong companies and as a penulty her parents locked her in a dark room. One day later the parents find their daughter dead. So, parents should assure their proper guidance towards their pagony otherwise it will be harder for them to control them if they grown up with such unethical actions.
To sum up, I want to conclude my opinion with the saying that, home is the first institution for learning where parents are the best mentors. Take care of children and give them right ethics is the first and foremost duty of every parents. If children did any misdeeds parents should accept their responsibility and correct them with small penulty not hard punishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 24.0651302605 295% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89237668161 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38114146832 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506726457399 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0996822844 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.842105263 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4736842105 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280896022796 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106707238512 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589104476617 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170620171173 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973772477499 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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