Some people believe that a good product that meets the needs of the consumers does not need advertising, and they are just a source of entertainment. I completely disagree with the above-said viewpoint, as adverts not only give knowledge about the product but also boost the economy of the country.
To begin with, advertisements help people know more about a product and even aware of new launches. When companies advertise their products, individuals come to know the salient features of the product and also get information on how to use it. Many of the local brands gain recognition in the market through adverts only. Furthermore, they come to know about different features and perfect usage of the product for their betterment through advertisements. In this era of huge competition among various companies, advertising products makes the people a better judge on which product is better, that is, making comparisons between same categories of products is easier. To illustrate, a deodorant brand, Fogg gained popularity among people through their advertisements because they provide proper information about their product in their advertisements.
Moreover, commercials help raise the GDP of a country. The buyers, who are often attracted towards buying the product through advertisements help companies, boost their sales. This increases the demand for various commodities. Finally, this increased demand makes the sales of organizations increase dramatically, resulting in amplifying the wealth of a nation. For instance, Apple, through proper advertising techniques has made a huge share in the economy of many countries, notably the USA.
To summarize, adverts are necessary for this contemporary epoch even if the quality of a product is superior as they give us information about newly launched products and plays a vital role in the economy of countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47586206897 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0812308179 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548275862069 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3940837571 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179987157493 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631764318442 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602469121731 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11141101629 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602033313682 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.