Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences can it lead?
In this modern era, Moving to another country is affecting individual as well as society. However, there are various reasons but mostly concerns are lifestyle, job opportunity, higher study and few more, consequently, it may have both positive and nagetive aspects and thus depends upon person to person.
Firstly, people migrate to other country for better lifestyle and raise in their living standard. In other words, every country has their own culture, food, the way of living, Which interact people out of the country. Secondly, seeking for better options for career along with the highly paid salary. For instantiate, my friend has a good experience of 10 years. Nevertheless, he had the lower salary, according to his work, he desvere higher so, by moving abroad and that makes it possible.
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Thirdly, Pupils look for better educational system. In general, undevopled countries provide low level of education and student take that decison for their brighter future. On the other hand, leaving home country can cause home-sickness because of language abilities and shocking cultural activities. Although, illegal immigrants face that problem like expectation. For example, government quarentine them in asylam in case of refugees with less facilities related to food, Sometimes they do not even have a proper meal throughout the day.
To concluded, It may change person's life and gain knowledge of society's thinking of misconception to shifting. Despite of that it have little drawback, People should aware of it before taking any further step. It would be beneficial for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, in general, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73370649848 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.167539967 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8666666667 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0399507527499 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0135169217761 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027947745193 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0233608316739 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167778617647 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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