With the increasing use of mobile phone and computer, the number of people who write letter has decreased. As a result, letter writing will disappear soon. Do you agree or disagree? How do you think letter writing is important？
The revolution of advanced technology has been becoming highly popular. While, traditional way of letter writing is deficited. As soon as, with the advancement hand-written letter will distinct. I am totally satisfied with this statement. However, In some cases writing letter have some importance in their own way.
Firstly, Phone is the global connecting device, which connects one person to another in few seconds by simply using calling system. In other words, there is no restriction and individual can communicate whenever they want, although today's smart cell have internet in it, it means that it broader our minds. Generally, expressing feelings by just writing is tough. For instantiate, I tried writing once a month ago, I was writing letter to my mom. However, without knowing about other person's feeling only, one sided thought i have and it is quiet difficult so, technology has made commuting much more easier. By internet on computer people do video call and see a person through the screen and both can express their feelings.
On the other hand, In some situations it is essential to write letter. In general, if a problem occurs related to water supply, we will write a letter because, we are sharing our concern not their, and it is an government work. For another example, It would costs less along with more benefits. However, computer or phones have some issue like it effect eyes and illness.
To concluded, There are a lot more profits of using advanced machinary. Nevertheless, writing have a small part in human's life. In my opinion, people should manage these little drawbacks by not relying on gadgets and follow the tradition, which our ancestors were used in ancient time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...haring our concern not their, and it is an government work. For another example, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, while, in general, in my opinion, in other words, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07446808511 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63952013555 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652482269504 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9708893825 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294934454266 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910236058829 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783610528208 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173495222819 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634992038266 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.