For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?
From the ancient time art has been playing a key role in our life.Nevertheless,in this modren era importance of a person's life have changed and people emphasize science,technology and business.In this will discuss, why is this occurs and what are the reasons,thus will lead to logical conclusion.
IN thesedays, science is going so far.scientist are keen to work because they found it interesting and they love do researcher on particular thing.they have responsbilty of the thier country,medical technology development etc.for instantiate, if any desease is spreading all over the countries scientist do research on how to get rid of it.moreover, it can be said that technology is would be the same as science but there are some differance. for example,without moving from your bed you can get food by just simply clicking on your phone and your food will be at your door step and lot more things.
On the other hand,art is crucial part of our cultural life it can not be difined into the words. Art is a diveded into the genres and it is divided into sub genres,anyhow there are few forms of art music,dance,sculpture and so on. people are attracted towords the art whether it is a form of music or dance.in other words, in a marriage art is used for entertainment purposes by arranging a kareoke , music band etc.further more,sculptures and paintings are more likely to show the point of view of the world.
In conclusion, people are enjoying the technology because a person do not need any skill to use that.although,they enjoy art too but art need skills by concluding this we can clearly see that a person is depending on the others,by the technology people become use to it that can be reason they are moving towards technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90847457627 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36589585855 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.451308602 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.857142857 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.1428571429 20.7667163134 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8571428571 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25838948206 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11045355252 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429192770227 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144622503706 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030131020703 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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