For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?
Over the years mankind has recognized the need for the full development in all spheres, bringing thriving in society. In this regard, uneven progress existed in all times and only changed the priority from culture to scientific and technological elaboration and making money. This essay will discuss the main reasons of changing in precedency throw the time and propose some possible solutions for keeping art in sight.
To begin with, the difference in nation needs and social hobbies between generations are considered to be the main reasons of changing in humanity preferences. On the one hand, a creative and liberal human by then was as significant as technologically proved person now. Even “New Your Times” says that science and business are the new culture, which requires imagination and thinking in an individual. On the other hand, the most developed spheres cause by popular doings in its time and changing with it. According to the “Forbes” magazine, in old times every human was not only talking about sculpture and painting but participating in it itself, which reminds todays situation about technologies. Hence, fields following after mainstream interests and different requests for specific people from society cause changes in prioritised scopes.
First and foremost, government efforts, directed to the subsidizing art formations and adding more hours in school schedule for music, painting and any creative activity should help the culture popularity. Firstly, sponsoring any art establishments provides higher quality of performance and attracts people to watch them. Secondly, including more creative subjects in children and teenagers education stimulates their interest now and then. Thus, interested in art society and qualitative shows and events will keep culture as one of the popular and important part of humans life.
To sum up, dominance of one field over others in the speed of development, inherent all stages of human extension. As a result, although the national personnel needs and crowd following the most popular trends change priorities, the cultural generations cultivation and art quality will maintain importance of culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
Over the years mankind has recognized the need for the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
... trends change priorities, the cultural generations cultivation and art quality will mainta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, talking about, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52694610778 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89510895304 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631736526946 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1048167022 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.066666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263851495272 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762382461147 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396013475202 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143400351036 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328453992986 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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