Impact of advertisement

Essay topics:

Impact of advertisement

It is irrefutable that advertisements play an important role in our human life because if ads will not be there unless many products sell. advertising is positive as well as negative effect on our life

On the positive side,ads are tell us about new products as a result people go to the market and buy things according to their choices other they may be confused .Furthermore ,many people get a job in advertisement industry which is good for overall economy of any country.

what is more ,ads touch us social issues .For example,when amitabh bachhan tell to people about the bring plus polio then people listen.To add to it,there are some informative ads good for out socity as well .For instance,there are some ads are not only related to the control the waste of water but also against the female foeticide.

On the negative side , sometimes people buy the things without need ,which is not good for our environment because people do not use those products very often . moreover,ads related to the unhealthy products ,which is definitely not good for us especially for children because they eat same things what they seen as a consequence,they faced many health problems like obesity ,which roots many other diseases.

To conclude,it can be said that , advertisement industry play an crucial role in our life because tell us a lot new information from all over the world which good for everyone.it has positive as well as negative impact on our life .

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91093117409 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80607087321 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574898785425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7175555745 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.166666667 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.1666666667 20.7667163134 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11056946935 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638218371019 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661998329828 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768578549482 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710476277319 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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