Team activities can teach more skills for life than other activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Team activities can teach more skills for life than other activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that team activities teach more skills as compared to the other activities,which we played alone .This essay agrees with given statement.A number of argument surround my opinion.

There are many advantages of team activities perhaps the main benefit is that people can learn a lot of skills which are good for their life For example,they can learn cooperation skills ,team management skills,problem solving ,and so on these skills are normally use in personal life of any individual.Furthermore,when people do work with in group then they can improve their communication skills as well.

Moreover , decision making skills also be can learn in team activities because in solo activities we can not learn these kind of skills .what is more , people can expand their know if they do work in team activities because they can leran from different view point on different topic so as a result ,we can say that team activities are more beneficial than solo activities Eventually,people can make freinds in team activities because a lot of people work in team activities.

However,solo activities are also important because in solo activities people can learn competition ,which is very crucial in today fast paced world . Finally,in solo activities people become more independent rather than dependent on the team members because people can improve their imagination .

To recapitulate,it can be said that,team activities as well as solo activities have own advantages as well a disadvantages although, I believe that team activities are far important than solo activities.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, kind of, as a result, as well as, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46586345382 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36296514949 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.953089827 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.833333333 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.5 20.7667163134 200% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438632079213 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23664295223 0.084324248473 281% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644860660836 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260016351973 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487267839537 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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