Increasing the price of petrol best way to reduce the traffic and pollution problems do u agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that pollution is big problem around the world as a result,some people say that climbing the price of the petrol is best way to mitigate the traffic as well as pollution problems although,it is good way but not the best method because there are many other ways to alleviate the pollution problems which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
Undoubtedly, if price will be increase of the petrol then most of the people will discourage their personal vehicles like cars and motorcycle which will help to reduce the traffic as well as pollution problems .For instance,recent study shows that ,where price of petrol is increase there people use more public transportation than private vehicles.
Although,there are some other methods to reduce the pollution as well as trafic .First of all,people should be use bicycle for short distance ,which is good for mitigate the pollution . secondly, traffic problems will not be mitigate unless people follow the rules and regulations which are made by the government.
Furthermore,goverment should be spent more money on public transportation because people can easily affordable.moreover,car pooling is another way to alleviate the pollution problems.For example,if five people go to the same place then instead taking 5 cars if they take one car which is good way to reduce the pollution.Eventually,goverment should be make struck law related to traffic.
To sum up,althogh, growing the price of petrol is good but it's is not best way there are other methods are better .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28048780488 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5322373508 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516260162602 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.495633104 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.5 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 24.6666666667 7.06120827912 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33901889686 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182200084125 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106383247058 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207045595376 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101114049185 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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