With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people thing that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important that youthink is letter writing
The technology has improved significantly in today’s world. Since the innovative devices such mobile phones and computers are invented, it has many ways. Some people believe that letters are at brink of extinction because of these modern gadgets. In my opinion, I do agree with the statement for several reasons.
Firstly, sending text via mobile phones or computers is much easier and very convenient than writing letters. Typing short messages on phones, sending then requires only a few minutes. Moreover, using technological devices transfer messages rapidly whenever writers feel like which are very convenient unlike sending message by tradition ways. Furthermore, writing a letter us a very impressive way to express their feeling because whenever someone write a letter for their friends then excitement happens whenever letter is not received.
On the other hand, use of mobile phones and computers can save time for sending messages. For instance, whtsapp and Facebook are some basic applications to deliver the messages. Secondly, writing letters have own importance , it becomes a part of memories. To examplify, wedding letters , joyful letters etecetea. In addition, whenever technological devices was rare, that time masses wrote letters and sending them to their pees. They communicated with each other with the help of letters. Presently, most of the humans write letters because they are fond of writing letters.
To sum up, even though writing letters has sentimental value to receipts. With high level of devices, it has many merits to all communication in modern world. Preserving traditional writing letters is very inevitable these days and it is replaced by technological methods. So, it is very crucial to write letters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46863468635 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78868873768 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5445956869 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2631578947 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317239926985 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944353377834 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567666012378 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194981823277 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315110784979 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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